I like the texture of this piece. After all music is about feeling; engineering use of sound textures helps the composition to refresh at critical moments; Its urban soul for sure. The melody drones on a bit after first minute or two but that’s where the messages layered on top should kick in strong enough to retain a listener’s interest,. Think on who your audience is to be; multiple hooks lyrically can erode the fascination of a good title. I’m big on poetics and composition. would love to hear more work from you. I like this approach of yours. hmu